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No. 6 is like Evangelion if Evangelion was only about Shinji being gay for Kaworu.
File size: 470 MB (HQ MKV), 220 MB (LQ MKV)
Japanesiness: Honorifics. Shit like “Obaa-chan” sensibly translated into “Granny”.
Karaoke.
Typesetting. This is really the only thing needed to be typeset.
This is an example where you want to write out the number. People can’t read that number very quickly as it is. Just go with “ten billion” to improve readability.
from him, Saho-san…
Why would you capitalize Birthday?
action-based expression.
You don’t capitalize the major unless it’s something like English or German – basically something that would be capitalized anyway.
You gotta use that hyphen because the two words together form an adjective.
blue-blood elites
She may be musing, but this is not a question. Take out the question mark and put in a period.
You don’t need the definite article here. Also, make it City Hall because it’s referring to a specific place.
You use the comma in quotations when the line ends in a period or when it regularly ends in a comma. That final comma should be a question mark, though.
second flat, not seconds flat.
Overall grade: B
That script had a lot of fucked-up terminology, so I’m surprised that I only saw a few really stupid errors along with a few minor ones. Not sure how gg will do compared to Doki, but I’ll let you know.
thanks for your review ^^